Sunday, October 21, 2012

This One's for the Real Toads I Miss

This was written for the Real Toads. I'm not so sure they want to hear from me, I haven't written poetry in quite awhile. However, I was happy to see they are still around.


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Went to wonder forgiven fine
Seen not forever unsought devine
Left lost unseen again replaced
Removed remake the invaded space

10 comments:

  1. Of course we are happy to hear from you!! Great piece!

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  2. Anyone, everyone is always welcome in the garden. I love your choice of words in this poem, and if you haven't been writing for some time, then this is quite a comeback piece!

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  4. The arrangement of the words weaves a tale!

    (fixing a typo in the comment above)

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  5. Toads may visit frequently, or hibernate for a time but, happily, on return they find the pond is still there and just as welcoming! Hop on in!

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  6. ..this lets one use their imagination and 'wonder'..nice.

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  7. Such a lovely write!!! I don't know you, but would like to welcome you anyway---

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  8. Hi, Hannah!!! So nice to read you...your word choices bring a feeling oc classical romance...beautiful writing!!

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  9. Love the description of Middle America in your profile .. I was raised and spent a good part of my life in IL / MO! I enjoyed your poem ...

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