Monday, January 2, 2012

Remember to Forget



I have
This feeling
In my mind
Of all
I see unclear

These words
So broken
In my mind
Yes they
Close in my fear

Simple
What the mind
Remembers
The heart
Will not let go


The Imaginary Garden with Real Toads: A Mini Challenge
15 lines 3 stanzas syllables 12, 123, 123, 12, 1234

2 comments:

  1. Well done! Thank you for participating in this challenge - your poem is a filled with emotion clearly expressed.

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  2. Interesting form, and a beautifully expressed poem. The repetition of the word "mind" from stanza to stanza reinforced the conflict the narrator feels.

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