The topics are random and the humor is mine.
This fits futuristic perfectly and would also go with Poetry Jam's prompt this week.
Intrigue as a character flaw... there is a huge idea to explore, as you have done with such innovation in this piece.
nice rhymes, too :)
Thanks. I am glad you noticed. I put down a little structure to the free form.
So much truth here: "the insincere seem to speak clear" !This whole piece is very well put, nothing insincere about it at all.K
Nice Work..love the rhyming scheme. I for one cannot give up on hope.
Thanks Suzie, it means a lot to know I am not the only one hoping.
I do love the sound of this poem as I read it aloud!
I never thought I would look so forward to reading comments... I have to say the RT group is never disappointing.
Fermented words of fearThat line really intrigued me. Fear is a bacteria of sorts. We can only hope we have the courage to punch it down. (and anyone who can rhyme and have a rhythm I admire)
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